What I Say vs. What I’d Like to Say About My Writing
March 7, 2019 § 58 Comments
by Sandra Ebejer
Ever since publicly declaring myself a Writer, I’ve had well-meaning friends and family express interest in my work. This is a far cry from the days of yore, when no one in my orbit understood what I, then a nonprofit grant writer, did for a living.
But once I began publishing my creative work online, suddenly it clicked: Oh, she’s a Writer. Cool. To the uninitiated, the title “Writer” conjures images of successful novelists — the Stephen Kings and James Pattersons of the world — who publish at breakneck pace, giving the impression that all it takes to pen a bestseller is a few free hours and a laptop. So, naturally, people are intrigued.
The nice thing about the Writer title is that, for the first time in my life, people want to talk to me about my work. The unfortunate thing about the Writer title is that, well, people want to talk to me about my work. Like most writers, I’m introverted and not particularly fond of talking about myself, so questions about my writing make me uncomfortable. I smile and offer up some terse response, though my internal monologue offers a glimpse into how I’d really like to reply.
The question: “How’s the writing going?”
What I say: “It’s fine.”
What I’d like to say: “Well, today I spent 45 minutes watching cat videos on YouTube because the personal essay I’m trying to write isn’t coming together and it’s easier to ignore the work than accept the fact that I might just be a hack. I took a break to get a snack and while eating, I read a story in a Pushcart Prize collection that was so moving it made my chest ache and I sobbed from the realization that I will never, ever write a piece so well-crafted. After that, I went back to my desk and stared at my essay for a while, wondering if maybe giving up my grant writing job wasn’t the smartest decision I’ve made, and then just before my son arrived home from school, I churned out a listicle of silly writing memes for my blog. I feel pretty overwhelmed and terrified most of the time but otherwise, you know, it’s fine.”
The question: “What are you writing right now?”
What I say: “Oh, I have a few things I’m juggling. Nothing I want to discuss in detail just yet.”
What I’d like to say: “Everything and nothing. I have drafts of numerous essays, blogs, and short stories saved on my hard drive. I have an excel document with hundreds of ideas and a long list of places where I’d like to submit my work, but I suffer from an overwhelming case of impostor syndrome so very little is shared with the world. I’m nearly done with one piece that might be okay once it goes through a couple dozen revisions, so I’m guessing it’ll be ready to submit to literary journals in six months or so, and then who knows if it’ll ever actually be accepted.”
The question: “Have you been published?”
What I say: “I post my work on Medium.com and my own website, and I have a piece coming out in Boston Globe Magazine in the spring.”
What I’d like to say: “I have a piece coming out in The Boston Globe, which is really exciting because it’s a publication my friends and family have actually heard of, though I don’t anticipate having additional work published anytime soon because that one Globe piece was clearly a total fluke. I’ve since tried writing for similar columns in The New York Times and other outlets, but my pieces are all terrible. I mean, who am I kidding? I’ll be lucky if I get a story in an unknown, soon-to-be-shuttered literary journal. That is, if I ever finish writing something, amirite? Have I mentioned I have impostor syndrome?”
The question: “How would you describe your writing? Any authors you can compare it to?”
What I say: “Well, a friend described my fiction as ‘slice of life with a dark edge,’ which I think sums it up nicely.”
What I’d like to say: “Oh, I don’t know. Unfinished? Look, I’m doing all I can to write decent stories in various formats. Please don’t ask me to compare my work to that of critically-acclaimed authors you’ve read in some book club. That’s just embarrassing, especially for the critically-acclaimed authors.”
The question: “Where do you get your ideas?”
What I say: “Just from day-to-day life.”
What I’d like to say: “Most ideas come to me when I’m unable to jot them down. It’s usually right as I’m drifting off to sleep that the most incredible narrative forms in my head and by the time I wake the next day, it’s long gone. When I try to consciously think of ideas, nothing happens. At all. Literally. You know how Homer Simpson gets dancing monkeys in his head when Marge is talking to him about something important? That’s me, trying to come up with plausible story lines.”
The question: “Are you able to make a decent living as a writer?”
What I say: “You know, that kind of thing takes time, so right now I’m just focusing my efforts on building an audience and working on my craft.”
What I’d like to say: “No. No, I’m not. Thanks for pointing that out. Can you pass the vodka?”
I’m hoping that as time passes, I’ll learn to accept that these well-meaning (albeit uncomfortable) questions are just another aspect of my fledgling writing career. But for now, my inner voice continues to rant as force a smile, a few polite replies, and subtly change the topic.
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Sandra Ebejer is a writer living in upstate New York with her husband, son, and two cats who haven’t figured out how to get along. Her work has appeared in numerous publications on Medium and will be published in The Boston Globe in March 2019. Read more of her work at www.sandraebejer.com.
Hah, perfect. I have to learn to watch for their eyes starting to glaze over.
Well said. I’m right there with you.
Thanks so much!
So funny Sandy, loved it! Can’t wait to read more of your entertaining and creative writing!
LOL. That is SO real. And I too have a “persona” that I use to deal with the outside world. Way easier for everyone else that way… 🙂
That “persona” is the only way to get through these conversations. Thanks for reading!
This is wonderful. I can so relate. I never have a good response when people ask me about my writing. And of course now I’m procrastinating by reading your blog. the Homer Simpson comment made me laugh out loud. We can all use a good laugh, right? So thx. This is what I deem worthwhile writerly procrastination.
Thank you so much! So glad my piece was helpful in your procrastination journey. I’m currently procrastinating by reading the comments left for this piece. So, really, we’re all just helping each other.
Love it!
This piece is so on target I feel as if you’ve been rummaging around in my brain. Does this mean I can trust you to write what needs to be written and I can go back to planning my garden?
Yes, from here on out I will write everything for you. It doesn’t have to make sense, though, does it? Because if it has to make sense, we might have a problem.
Enjoyable read! I too liked the Homer Simpson comment. As I read it I gave my husband that look that says….”I know you do that too”.
Ha! I think we all get Homer Simpson brain from time to time.
This is only too familiar. Once I made the mistake of actually explaining that I was submitting to journals that only accept 1 or 2 pieces in a thousand and the person began explaining to me how I should send my writing to places that publish everything. Uh-huh. sigh
That reminds me of when I worked in fundraising, and people would say, “Bill Gates has money. Why don’t you just send him a grant proposal?” It…really doesn’t work that way, but thanks. Sigh.
yes!
Or when my memoir came out and friends suggested I try to get on Oprah, or be interviewed by Terry Gross. Another big sigh.
Oh, how I can relate!
I can so relate to your answers. Maybe that’s why I don’t really feel like letting people in on my writing.
Lovely article! Thank you. I nodded and chuckled all the way through.
Thanks so much!
All too relatable! Great article–and look, in a literary journal! Kudos!
Thanks so much!
If you had mentioned vacuuming, I would have thought you’ve a hidden camera in my home.
That was so funny and so engaging, I forgot to notice HOW WELL WRITTEN it was. Congrats. I don’t think you’ll need that vodka….
That’s so kind of you to say! Thank you! (But I know I’ll still need the vodka.)
This was great! My favorite article to date. There were meaningful tells and laugh out loud shares of your experiences as a writer thus far. All family biases aside I think you’re going to kick ass as a writer!
Thanks, DiAnne! I respect your work so much, so your kind words mean a lot. (Family biases aside…) 🙂 xoxo
😊xoxo
This is me every damn day. Thank you for putting it both eloquently and hilariously into words. This reply is probably the only writing I’ll finish today. This week.
Thank you so much! This reply might be the last thing I write for a long while, too, so we can just enable one another’s procrastination.
And I thought I was the only one who felt that way! Enjoyed reading this.
Thank you!
Your essay is super timing for me, Sandra. I’m working on an essay collection using new forms I have little experience with. It’s challenging enough for me to explain to myself what I’m writing, let alone curious friends. And when they ask me how the writing is going? Your response put it all in perspective. Thanks for letting us eavesdrop.
Thanks, Iris! Best of luck with your essay collection!
Thank you!
Definitely relatable. It’s definitely taking me some time to get used to saying I am a writer out loud and not feeling judged by it.
I’m not sure if that will ever go away for me, unfortunately…
Every word so true. Maybe you have to be a little crazy to be a writer, or maybe being a writer makes you so. Loved this!
Thanks! 🙂
These are great! And then there’s the one that always drives me crazy: “Are you working on anything interesting?”
That one always hurts. Because usually my answer (at least, in my head) is, “No. I haven’t had a single coherent thought in a long while, so all of my work right now is very uninteresting. But thanks for asking.”
So relatable! Thanks for putting this out there!! Enjoyed your piece, VERY much :-))
Thank you so much!
Being new to the writing community I found your article to be very refreshing. So much to learn and grasp. Looking forward to your next article.
Thank you so much!
Well said. I mean well written, Writer.
Thanks so much! 🙂
Outstanding!!!
Thanks, Tom! 🙂
gosh have you hit the nail on the head. I justify watching cat videos by saving them to show to my grandkids. And I’m reading your post and replying instead of getting on with one of my current projects. Sigh
We all need excuses to help procrastinate. Cat videos and post comments are perfectly acceptable. 😉 Thanks for reading!
Great job, Sandra. I just started a blog and feel the exact same way!
So, so, so true. Clearly I need to go vodka shopping instead of doing this writing. Where can I get vodka at 11 pm? Thanks for the great read.
There should be an all-night liquor store just for writers. Someplace we can get boozy and commiserate at all hours. 😉 Thanks for reading!
“Oh, I don’t know. Unfinished?” I laughed out loud and almost snorted my glass of wine. Actually, I laughed out loud several times, in grateful recognition. Always good to be reminded we’re not alone in this crazy life. Thank you for this.
So glad you enjoyed it! And I approve of the wine drinking while reading. 🙂 Thanks for the kind words!
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